Thesis statement and outline for an essay 

   

Positive and negative effects of fashion on young people 

Introduction :

Topic sentence : Nowadays people tend to believe, that being fashionable and good-looking could be a key to success.
Thesis statement : Fashion industry created a lot of jobs, but also did some negative effects that we need to discuss. 

Body :

1. First of all, I would like to talk about positive points about fashion on young people.

a) Promotes creativity

b) Gives opportunity to look different and individual

2. However, there are some disadvantages too

a) Fashion causes additional expenses

b) Fashion models gives a wrong thinking about woman's body,with telling that every girl have to be especially slim.

c) Fashion can make teenagers or kids from families that are not rich feel not good about themselves, because their parents can't afford new clothes. 

Conclusion :

To sum up, I would say that fashion should not be taken as important as it is nowadays, because there are plenty things that need to be focus on.